1、【改】It pains me to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week、

2、【改】The search of the forest was complete

3、【原】The search of the forest that they conducted was entirely complete

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5、二、

6、四、

7、【原】It will be our aim to ensure proper health care for each and everyone of the Chinese people

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9、【原】This book will help you master the basic elements of good writing

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11、一、

12、【改】She immediately obliged anyone who telephoned for help with homework、

13、【原】It makes me feel painful to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a

14、week、

15、【改】Our aim is to ensure proper health care for all Chinese、

16、【原】Whenever anyone telephoned her to ask her for help with their homework she always obliged right away、

17、五、

18、【改】This book will help you master the basics of good writing